This. This is what we call “bad writing”.
Why does the ML go along with the FL’s nonsense? No real reason, just that the plot requires it.
Why does the FL talk about “escaping” the ML when she could literally leave at any point? Just nonsense.
This whole “original FL” bit is extremely forced already, and the FL’s dumbassery in trying to push it along just makes the whole thing feel like a waste of the reader’s time.
Goaties
This. This is what we call “bad writing”.
Why does the ML go along with the FL’s nonsense? No real reason, just that the plot requires it.
Why does the FL talk about “escaping” the ML when she could literally leave at any point? Just nonsense.
This whole “original FL” bit is extremely forced already, and the FL’s dumbassery in trying to push it along just makes the whole thing feel like a waste of the reader’s time.